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On this page, you can download a few sample essays that we have checked previously.

These samples are available for you to download at no cost ““ with compliments from us. What you see is what you get (we know it’s clichéd, but we mean it).

We have inserted comments into the essay at the relevant sections. The comments are there for any one or more of the following reasons:

  • To indicate that a correction is required, and why it is required
  • To indicate that your work is on target, in terms of KIs or arguments.
  • To indicate that something is flawed, in terms of KIs or arguments
  • To request to change, add or remove an example.
  • To comment on links to WOKs and AOKs, or the lack thereof.
  • To indicate how to improve an argument.

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